Telling Readers What This Thing Is


Hello,

I hope you are all hanging in there after a bruising start to the second Trump administration. Here in Canada the main concern is over tariffs, which have been averted for the time being. I am worried too, both for myself and for Canada. Will my indexing work for US clients be affected? I don’t think so. I don’t think that an index counts as an “imported good,” but then again, I’m no trade expert. I am concerned, though, that my US clients, including potential clients, may not know either and so decide to avoid non-American indexers. Better to play it safe in a time of fear and uncertainty.

What do you think? Are you concerned? If tariffs are ever enacted, maybe I’ll write again later on my experience, once I have a chance to see how this all plays out.

Turning back to this current mini-series on the basic elements of an index, in my last email I wrote about entries and arrays, which I described as the building blocks of an index. I defined an entry as “what this thing is + where to find it.” Today I’m going to expand on “what this thing is,” also known as main headings and subheadings.

The fundamental purpose of an index is to guide readers to the relevant information that the reader is searching for. To do that, the index needs to be clearly written, which begins with the first words that the reader sees.

Main Headings

The main heading, also known simply as the heading, kicks off the entry. This is the first word or phrase that you see in an entry and array. It is typically a noun, and should be clear and concise. If a longer phrase is needed, the main heading should lead with the most important element. The main heading should also match how the term is used in the text, such as using the same spelling and capitalization.

The heading should be reflective of both the text and the audience. Is the book discussing cars more generally or electric vehicles specifically? Or both? Will readers be reading this book to learn about the auto industry, new innovations, or specific brands and models? Or all of the above? To give another example, biblical characters such as Matthew, Silas, and Timothy probably don’t need a gloss in a work of biblical studies to clarify their identities, but these names may be more unfamiliar to readers if they appear in other disciplines.

Another consideration is whether or not to pluralize main headings. Should it be dog or dogs? Cantaloupe or cantaloupes? To start, be mindful of differences in nuance. Freedom is somewhat different from freedoms, for example. Otherwise, I tend to follow common usage. If a term is commonly pluralized, then I go ahead and make it plural in the index, which I think reads more naturally.

To give a few examples of main headings:

Acts (biblical book)
Cleveland, Grover
electric vehicles
heat transfer
London (ON)
tariffs, retaliatory

Subheadings

For short arrays containing a handful of locators, a main heading is usually sufficient to specify what this thing is. But more specificity is often needed for topics with extensive discussion (usually when there are more than 6-10 locators) or if there are different aspects that readers would appreciate differentiated.

The subheading is placed after the main heading. Its purpose is to further clarify what this thing is. Because subheadings often differentiate references from one another, there are usually multiple subheadings per array.

Since the subheading is appended, there is more flexibility in how it can be phrased. Depending on the context, the subheading can be either a short word or phrase, or it can be longer and more descriptive. In all cases, the relationship between the main heading and subheading should be clear. If possible, I try to also lead with the key word, which both affects how the subheadings are alphabetically sorted and, I think, makes it easier for readers to find the subheading as they scan the array.

For example,

Acts (biblical book): authorship; within biblical canon; commentaries on; Paul within
Cleveland, Grover: first presidency; free-silver issue; legislative achievements; private life between presidential terms; second presidency
heat transfer: conduction; convection

Effective headings and subheadings connect readers to the text. Main headings are the point at which readers encounter the index, and readers should not need to guess what this thing is. The same is true for subheadings, if the reader decides to read further into the array.

Tell the reader what they need to know. Be specific and concise. Do this, and your index will be well on its way to being excellent.

Yours in indexing,

Stephen

Stephen Ullstrom

2x award-winning book indexer and the author of Book Indexing: A Step-by-Step Guide. I teach you how to write excellent indexes, along with reflections on succeeding as a freelance indexer.

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